Title: BOB the builder W.A.L.t write a limerick In room 2 we have been writing limericks. A limerick is something that has,5 or 7 lines and lines 1 to 3 and 5 rime but 3 and 4 do not rime like the others. So what i mean is 3 and 4 have different riming words, to the others.
Once there was a man named Bob,
Who had a massive gob. He swallowed a log, and then a hog! And that was the end of Bob!
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Hi Jai, your limerick is really great, you have used very interesting and descriptive words that paint a clear picture of poor Bob and and how his big gob got him into trouble. Your use of correct punctuation makes the poem flow well. Ka Pai Jai!
ReplyDeleteI look forward to reading more of the poetry you are working on this term.