Friday 21 May 2021

Haiku poems


W.A.L.T write a haiku


In room 2 we have been doing haiku poems. They are mainly about
autumn leaves. This is my one I hope you like it, thank you very much. 


Scarlet coloured leaves


Satisfying crunchy leaves 


Cool autumn season 

        i love autumn

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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous31 May 2021 at 14:28

    Hi Jai, I’m Max from NBC.
    I really liked your blog post. I liked how you showed us a photo to help people like me know what you are writing about. This brought me back to when I did a Haiku in year 5 or 6 and I’m still doing it now! Why was your class learning about Haiku? Are you doing anything else new?

    If you did another Haiku would you change it up?

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  2. Anonymous31 May 2021 at 14:34

    Hi Jai, My name is Charlotte and I am a student at NBC.
    I really like this blog post because you have explained what you are doing and had an example. You also had the right syllables and you added a picture to it.
    Next time you could add a little more information.
    What is your favourite part of autumn?

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  3. Anonymous22 June 2021 at 14:24

    Hi Jai its Emanuel here from here From NBC school I like your writing because i like Autumn because every Autumn I go out with my family somewere
    fun

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