Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 26 August 2020
Friday, 21 August 2020
Jai narrative writing
Once upon a time there lived a toad that was an ugly monster. He was so aggressive that he would eat your head off if you looked at him for a long time.
He looked black like the night sky, and he had spikes all over his body. When something hits him he makes an awful screeching noise. He lived in an abandoned cave. It was very damp. You could hear plip plop plip plop as the water dripped from the ceiling and ran
down the walls. There was a hobo called Joe in the bushes. He was hunting the toad because he wanted the toad's spikes. On the same day there was an explorer. His name was Jai and he is trying to find the extinct toad/main character to put it in the zoo. But in the corner of Jais' eye he sees hobo Joe trying to kill the toad but Jai swoops in and grapes the toad and takes the toad to the zoo. the end.Thursday, 20 August 2020
Thursday, 30 July 2020
Secondly, I do not like doing the dishes at my house after dinner. Sometimes I have to do the dishes when all I want to do is relax. Thursday, 2 July 2020
we shouldn't have to go to school
Firstly going to school wastes 6 hours of our day. We could be
doing fun things at home and learning just as mach at home.
Secondly, we do the same thing everyday. It is boring!!!!!!!!
For example, we learn the same maths strategy!
Finally, the teachers boss us around the class room because if we do one thing wrong, even if we go to the toilet and get a drink of water without asking we get into trouble. In conclusion, we shouldn't go to school because it is boring.
Friday, 26 June 2020
Jai Hodder Zoo Arguement
I think animals should be kept in zoos.
they should have a massive enclosure
Keep the animals safe from poachers
Have trees in giraffe enclosure not hay
I think that animals should be kept in zoos. Here are three reasons why. They should have a massive enclosure, it keeps the animals safe from poachers and zoos should have trees in the giraffe enclosure .
Firstly, I think animals should be in zoos to stop then roaming around the streets. I think wild animals can threaten people around the streets. I think that animals should also have
a good zookeeper in the zoo to give the animals their correct food.
Secondly, I think zoos are good because they can save animals from poachers. This is good because we don't want to lose those animals and for them to become extinct. The zookeeper will also look after the animals correctly.
Finally, it is important that giraffes have trees in their enclosure so it is just like their habitat in the wild and the leaves from the trees are a good source of food for the giraffes.
I think that animals should be in zoos because they are tamed and have the zookeepers give them a good and happy life. The end from Jai
Wednesday, 3 June 2020
Sid Character description
His left eye is bigger then his right eye. his cote is like a shaggy dog. I like Sid because he is funny
and fire king.





