Friday, 23 October 2020

A moment in time at the market.

Walt: use in punctuation correctly and write in first person.


One Saturday afternoon Mum and I and my brother and my cousins went to the Riccarton Market. It was so sunny I could have worn a t-shirt as there were no rain clouds. When we got there, there was a butterfly knife and a rubber band gun. I could smell yummy bakery food. For lunch I had an American hotdog boy they were good for my tum tum. Then after we had lunch we jumped in the van and went home. It started to rain. 


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  1. Leanne Hodder (Mum)24 October 2020 at 10:51

    Hi Jai, I remember that day very well, we had a fabulous weekend with your cousins. The American hot dog's went down a treat! You have used excellent punctuation in this recount of our day at Riccarton markets. Well done buddy, keep it up 👌

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